Path of Destruction: Ages Before Myst
Posted 28 June 2006 - 08:33 PM
Posted 29 June 2006 - 08:01 AM
Posted 29 June 2006 - 10:31 AM
New air enters some.
- Words of the Watcher, 1:117-119
Posted 29 June 2006 - 11:11 AM
I've written the part about their younger days when they weren't so evil; I am now going on to describing Gehn and how he's making out in Riven as their new Leader, and describing how Sirrus and Achenar are destroying the lives of the inhabitants of their fathers' Ages.
Posted 29 June 2006 - 05:27 PM
Hope you enjoy
Remember, please critisize (not to much, though, but enough)
p.s: It's in the Library (Mred)
Edited by Naigahsehn, 29 June 2006 - 05:30 PM.
Posted 30 June 2006 - 08:58 PM
Posted 01 July 2006 - 06:53 AM
I really like it, but I think it needs more dialouge.
That is really my only suggestion, great work
Posted 01 July 2006 - 06:55 AM
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