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#1 Naigahsehn

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Posted 28 June 2006 - 08:33 PM

Hey guys. I'm currently working on a new fan-based story called Path of Destruction:Ages Before Myst. I was hoping to have it done sometime within the near future (a month or two, perhaps). It's about Sirrus and Achenars' childhood and how they become the greedy, evil-hearted men we know them as today(aswell as how Gehn became a dictator over the Rivenese, and how and the Stranger recieves the Myst linking book here on Earth {Tomahna}). Anyway, I just wanted to know if any of you would like to read it when it's finished. I want some critisizim (hopefully not too much). I'll keep you posted on it's progress, okay.

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Posted 29 June 2006 - 01:04 AM

Sounds interesting! Yes, please post (in the MRED forum) when you have a chapter to share! biggrin.gif
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#3 Naigahsehn

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Posted 29 June 2006 - 08:01 AM

K. don't worry, i will biggrin.gif
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Posted 29 June 2006 - 10:31 AM

I like the idea - I'm looking forward to it.
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#5 Naigahsehn

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Posted 29 June 2006 - 11:11 AM

Sofar, it's going along at a faster pace then I first expected.

I've written the part about their younger days when they weren't so evil; I am now going on to describing Gehn and how he's making out in Riven as their new Leader, and describing how Sirrus and Achenar are destroying the lives of the inhabitants of their fathers' Ages.
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#6 Naigahsehn

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Posted 29 June 2006 - 05:27 PM

I added what I have made so far.

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Edited by Naigahsehn, 29 June 2006 - 05:30 PM.

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#7 Naigahsehn

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Posted 30 June 2006 - 08:58 PM

Oh, I have another story on the go as well-it's called Hope. I'll tell you more about it later smile.gif
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Posted 01 July 2006 - 06:53 AM

Um, I wasn't able to post at the story itself, so I'll post here.

I really like it, but I think it needs more dialouge.

That is really my only suggestion, great work smile.gif

#9 Naigahsehn

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Posted 01 July 2006 - 06:55 AM

Thanks, lego_addict. I've been meaning to add more dialogue, but I haven't got around to doing so just yet. But I will when I can
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